Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Narrative Twist

"Karma"
By: Anthony Barragan

    She left about four o'clock in the morning. Since midnight her husband had been dozing in a deserted little room, in company with three other men whose wives were having a good time. He threw over her shoulders the garments he had brought for them to go home in, modest everyday clothes, whose poverty clashed with the beauty of the ball-dress. She was conscious of this and was anxious to hurry away, so that she should not be noticed by the other women putting on their costly furs. She ran off, but something was missing. When she realized her necklace was gone, Mme. Losiel panicked. Instead of telling her friend, she went to go buy a new necklace. Working hard to give money back to the bank, they ended up poorer than before.

    She came to know the heavy work of the house, the hateful duties of the kitchen. She washed the plates, wearing out her pink nails on the coarse pottery and the bottoms of pans. She washed the dirty linen, the shirts and dish-cloths, and hung them out to dry on a string; every morning she took the dustbin down into the street and carried up the water, stopping on each landing to get her breath. And, clad like a poor woman, she went to the fruiterer, to the grocer, to the butcher, a basket on her arm, haggling, insulted, fighting for every wretched halfpenny of her money.


    10 years later, Mme. Loisel bumped into her friend , Mme. Foriester, who was the one who let Mme. Loisel borrow that necklace. She noticed how nice Mme. Foriester was dressed, Mme. Foriester didn’t noticed Mme. Loisel from her looks until she reminded her who she was. Mme. Losiel told her the truth, the necklace was fake.
Mme. Loisel thought, “I am going to steal the necklace that was supposed to be mine…” 

    She asked Mme. Foriester to “borrow” it. Mme. Foriester agreed and gave it to Mme. Loisel and says, “Make sure you don’t lose it!’ She laughed and walked away.
Mme. Loisel ran off and told her husband the great news that she has the REAL necklace. Mme. Loisel told him the story about the necklace.  He was thrilled. They returned the necklace and went to go find a fake replica. After hundreds and hundreds of stores, the Loisel Family found the necklace. Without thinking, they purchased the necklace and gave it to Mme. Foriester who was in the store. Leaving the store, a voice said, “Thank you for shopping at Mme. Foriester's Fab Jewelz!” As they left, they restart their lives rich and wealthy, but didn’t know how their future was going to change.

    Back at Mme. Foriester’s Fab Jewelz, Mme. Foriester saw the Loisel Family running off happily, which she never saw.

    “Something suspicious is happening here, I should go check to see if my necklace was still there…” Mme. Foriester mumbled.

    As she was walking toward the pillar the necklace was there, she noticed that it was missing. She rushed toward the register to see today’s purchases, they saw Mme. Loisel’s name under, “Classic Paste Diamond Necklace.” She was angry. Angry how the Loisel family tricked her. Mme. Foriester contacted the police immediately.


    Before they could buy anything, the police surrounded the theifs and sent them to prison. Not just any prison, Mme. Foriester’s Junky Jail. There, they were treated badly and surrounded by violent men. Staring at their every movement.

    “At least it is better than our home right now!” Mme. Loisel said to cheer up Mr. Loisel. 

    Mr. Loisel said in a depressed voice, “ I… was the one… who was so nice… and so thoughtful… to buy those tickets… -” He paused, “-it was my fault.”


    Crying by the corner of the cell, a policeman opened the cell. 

    “Alright you are fr-” He said, but cut off by Mme. Loisel, 

    “Oh thank you for letting me free from that, that… MONSTER!” 

    “Not you, him, the one that is crying. You were the one who make this plan, who made the decision, Mr. Loisel here was not part of your “gang”,” he said, “I have orders from Mme. Foriester to give the money to Mr. Loisel to restart his life fresh and clean. He doesn’t deserve a wife like you.”

    A big bang was made by the bars as they clashed into each other. 

    “Wait! What about me!” Mme. Loisel screamed from the top of her lungs. 

    “ I don’t think you want to live with a, “Monster”!” Mr. Loisel said in a sassy way. 

    Now, the husband lives in an expensive apartment on floor 57, with the items and furniture that Mme. Loisel ever wished. 

    “Man, what has life become? I lost a wife, I lost money, had hard labor, what next?” He said softly.

    Everyday, he sits by the grand window, looking at the prison Mme. Loisel is in, or Mme. Bel is at. Mr. Loisel couldn’t handle long-distance relationships, so he got divorced. As he waits, years past, waiting for Mme. Bel to look out her window.

Monday, October 26, 2015

Blog of the Week Oct. 26, 2015

Prompt: How elements of a story interacts with one another.
Focusing on setting and characters.
Powerless by Matthew Cody
Page 128 Halfway


     In the book Powerless, Bud and Clay becomes more violent than they normally do. Back at the Bus Stop, they are less likely to use their powers against other people. That is because of a rule of superpowers and to avoid to be seen using the powers. The rule is to not let adults know. So, the bus stops are normally in front of houses, so they are less likely to use their powers. Since the Superheroes has a treehouse as a headquarters, the super-bullies (Super-villains in the story) has a junk yard as their headquarters, which seems odd since one of the bullies powers is stench. Anyways, as Daniel and the Super-friends flew Daniel back home, they spotted trouble in the yard. Villains won this time because of the rule of the adults. Since they are in their headquarters, they feel stronger than before. That is how setting effects character and how confident they are. 

     On the other hand, Superheroes could be powerful than before, or just a regular human being. Being alone makes Daniel a bit more alert with his surroundings. With that "power", Daniel could defend himself way better and smarter to get out of situations. On one risky move, he was sitting on a bench in a museum reading a book. A couple of seconds later, Clay and Bud starts to bully Daniel. Daniel makes a move to get out of the room and ends up falling off a cliff. Nice move, Daniel. As you could see here, he had the guts to shove the bullies out of his way and makes a run for it. If there was his super-friends with him, that would never happen. As you can see, Daniel has new characteristic, and it's brave. That setting was a perfect moment for Daniel to be courageous and to get out of that situation.

     As you have seen, character can change by the setting. Either alone or at your favorite place, mood changes, emotions changes, and personality could change. So, the elements and order of the story changes pretty much characterization, but you just have to imagine it to make it real. 

Will you want to ride them? Is it because the scenery?

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Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Blog for the Week 10/12/15

Prompt: Describe the setting time and place. Draw it. What have you learned about life from what you're reading?
Powerless by Matthew Cody
Page 57, Started


    In the book Powerless, Daniel runs into trouble in his new town. As he meets his new neighbors, Daniel discovered something odd around him. A blink of an eye, teens are gone. They seem like they have some sort of superpower. Daniel digs deeper to discover the secrets of Noble Green.

    This books shows me how mysterious life is. You never know what is beneath you, neither what walks the lands before you. This book makes you think differently. Is there a superhuman running around this town, or a hero that can make a difference? This book shows how life changes over the years, along with the future. The next thing you know, we are going to live in a different planet with new resources. That is what I learned in only 57 pages.

    In Noble Green, Daniel meets his new friends, along with his bully to greet him. At school, a field trip was planned for the following day. As they went on the school field trip, his bully mistakenly made Daniel fall off a cliff. Thinking how he is going to die, a superhero floats him back up to the surface safe and sound.

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Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Banned Books Blog



Captain Underpants 
By Dav Pilkey


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"About Banned & Challenged Books." American Library Association. American Library                          Association, 2015. Web. 8 Oct. 2105. <http://www.ala.org/bbooks/about>.

American Library Association. "Banned Books Week: Celebrating the Freedom to Read." Banned &        Challenged Books. American Library Association, 2015. Web. 8 Oct. 2015.                                          <http://www.ala.org/bbooks/bannedbooksweek>

Banned Books Week. "About." Banned Books Wek. Andi Sporkin, Millie Davis, 2015. Web. 8 Oct.                2015. <http://www.bannedbooksweek.org/about>